Thursday, March 24, 2011

Am I a True Poet? Nahhhhh.

The same friend who told me to do a blog now also told me to do some poetry (I think this friend is very persuasive). My first one was about this invisible girl. This is my friend and I's final draft on that.

Invisible Girl

I know exactly what you are.
And it Leaves a painful scar.
I know whatever lies you told.
And what the future will come to hold.
You don't even know me.
How does that bring you glee?
I know all of your mistakes.
And I know what it takes.
To be a True Friend
To have a friendship that will never end.

Even If I'm still an invisible girl.


This is the original (I was forced to put this on)

Invisible Girl

I know what you all are,
it leaves a painful scar.
I know what lies you've told,
and what the future comes to hold.
You may never know me,
which may send you with glee,
cause I know all your mistakes,
though I know what it takes.
To be an true friend,
a friendship that will never end.
While you are in a whirl,
I'm still here, the invisible girl.

My next one was on Sister Swears and my friend calls all her friends her sister's and soooo she calls her secrets her sister swears. This is just the first paragraph (I'm only showing one paragraph cause I don't feel like showing the rest :D)

Sister Swears

What is truly a sister swear,
is it about a bond that shall never be broken.
Where it leaves friends with care.
That will remain a secret unspoken.

Who knows maybe I can be a poet.

2 comments:

  1. Thanks for Posting my Version of the Poem :D You need to post your draft then the edited draft

    ---Kiwi

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